Abused by What I Feel

reeferchief

Help me, I've tore away my insides
I'm lost, and failing quick
I've ripped away the part of me
the part that made me sick
You look down on my carcas
you stare, but cannot save
this broken heart,
beats slower as it bleeds
It drains away with the sickness
that I'd come to feel,
it may have been self inflicted
but it took another
to strike the deal
now I'm lying here in pieces
and you're stood their looking frail.

catefrances

if i may be so bold as to suggest an amendment.

Help me, I've tore away my insides
I'm lost, and failing quick
I've ripped away the part of me
the part that made me sick
You look down on my carcas
you stare, but cannot save
this broken heart,
beats slower as it bleeds
It drains away with the sickness
that I'd come to feel,
it may have been self inflicted
but it took another
to strike the deal
now I'm lying here in pieces
as you stand there looking frail.


i really like this one reefer.