Love ? hate

sicnevol
sicnevol Posts: 180
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I love you
I hate you
I crave the touch
that makes my skin crawl.
Kiss me and I'll die
because your lips are posion.
I miss you
and I hate myself for it.
Touch me
kiss me
one last time.
Now be gone and
never return to me.
That's two things we've got, Tape and Time.
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  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    Perfect description of a love/hate relationship to me.:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    like this one a lot

    you are able to capture so much in a few lines...try as i might i just can't be as gorgeously concise.
  • sicnevol
    sicnevol Posts: 180
    thanks. thats why I try to write lyrics. you have to be consice unless you have 8 min songs like tool.
    That's two things we've got, Tape and Time.

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