Atomic Love

wishiwaslukinwishiwaslukin Posts: 10
the nuclei collide

membranes slough away

two become one

and for a moment
you can see
the face of God.

The vision fades

your wings have melted

and this time, so have you.

Only the shadows remain
to tell the tale
a warning to all.
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    the nuclei collide

    membranes slough away

    two become one

    and for a moment
    you can see
    the face of God.

    In my humble opinion, this should be the whole poem. It should end here. I like it quite a bit like that.
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  • i never thought about it, but i like it there too. thanks.
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