Help Me! (desperate, ASAP please)
miskin
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HELP ME!! Please!
I am AWFUL at writing lyrics. Im recording vocals to a 2 tracks tomorrow for my band that I haven’t really written any lyrics worth speaking for. Its for my bands 6 track EP that is due to come out late August on Itunes and on limited CD.
Obviously you have no melody to work with, but don’t worry about that. I have 3 verses for both songs, so if you could just follow the same structure and add a couple of verses on the end of both, if there are any problems singing I can just take your ideas and change them around to fit.
So basically treat it like a poem which needs to be extended 2 verses (2 verses each for both please!)
I’ll need a chorus too but I can write that based on what I have or something.
Yes im desperate. Yes I’m bad at lyric writing so you don’t have much to work with.
I doubt many people will get back to this, but I promise whoevers work I use will be credited within the CD artwork. The EP is called ‘Into the Silence’.
First Song:
Its only a lifetime, i can wait that long
forgetting names but i'll remember songs
thinking of your reasons, delays are fine
had been hoping your thoughts would answer mine?
I act like youre failing me, its not true
following this road and decieving you
becoming a stranger on your part
she knows my face but not my heart.
each stand i take that is my last
spoils our future, taints our past
the truth is wrapped up inside of me
cant take the chance that you'll see.
SONG TWO:
i can almost see your face if i look
you would have laughed, looked up from your book
but the shapes change as time goes by
things don't look the same however i try
and now i'll try and give you a voice
though in the air i'll be lost in noise
i'll sing out to the sea and the stars
in silence we can claim whats ours
and we'll dance and sing where no-one knows
to the sound of the waves and wind which blows
and i'll set my dream upon a cloud
like it won't be real if said aloud
__________________
Cheers xx
I am AWFUL at writing lyrics. Im recording vocals to a 2 tracks tomorrow for my band that I haven’t really written any lyrics worth speaking for. Its for my bands 6 track EP that is due to come out late August on Itunes and on limited CD.
Obviously you have no melody to work with, but don’t worry about that. I have 3 verses for both songs, so if you could just follow the same structure and add a couple of verses on the end of both, if there are any problems singing I can just take your ideas and change them around to fit.
So basically treat it like a poem which needs to be extended 2 verses (2 verses each for both please!)
I’ll need a chorus too but I can write that based on what I have or something.
Yes im desperate. Yes I’m bad at lyric writing so you don’t have much to work with.
I doubt many people will get back to this, but I promise whoevers work I use will be credited within the CD artwork. The EP is called ‘Into the Silence’.
First Song:
Its only a lifetime, i can wait that long
forgetting names but i'll remember songs
thinking of your reasons, delays are fine
had been hoping your thoughts would answer mine?
I act like youre failing me, its not true
following this road and decieving you
becoming a stranger on your part
she knows my face but not my heart.
each stand i take that is my last
spoils our future, taints our past
the truth is wrapped up inside of me
cant take the chance that you'll see.
SONG TWO:
i can almost see your face if i look
you would have laughed, looked up from your book
but the shapes change as time goes by
things don't look the same however i try
and now i'll try and give you a voice
though in the air i'll be lost in noise
i'll sing out to the sea and the stars
in silence we can claim whats ours
and we'll dance and sing where no-one knows
to the sound of the waves and wind which blows
and i'll set my dream upon a cloud
like it won't be real if said aloud
__________________
Cheers xx
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