For a better life

(:Smile:)(:Smile:) Posts: 117
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
for a better life
under thousands of rainbows
warm is the sun
getting wet when the rain goes

for a better life
taking breath of each other
dad is the moonlight
divine is your mother

for a better life
now or never
as we deserve it
staying young forever

for a better life
gorgeous is giving
and isn’t it simply –
when the day dies the night is for living
The man they call my enemy, I've seen his eyes
He looks just like me, a mirror

The more you read, we've been deceived
Everyday it becomes clearer,...

Clearer.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    ABSOLUTELY>>>>>>>>>>>>

    Astounding:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • (:Smile:)(:Smile:) Posts: 117
    english isn't my native language, but I tried hardly...:)
    The man they call my enemy, I've seen his eyes
    He looks just like me, a mirror

    The more you read, we've been deceived
    Everyday it becomes clearer,...

    Clearer.
  • Lovely (:Smile:)! And your username is delightful too! :):)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • (:Smile:) wrote:
    for a better life
    now or never
    as we deserve it
    staying young forever

    i love this poem so much - but i love this stanza in particular - thank you.
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • (:Smile:)(:Smile:) Posts: 117
    wow... didn't expect that much... thanx... :)
    The man they call my enemy, I've seen his eyes
    He looks just like me, a mirror

    The more you read, we've been deceived
    Everyday it becomes clearer,...

    Clearer.
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