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Hi, new to the group

lithe1439lithe1439 Posts: 5
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Hiya, my username is lithe1439. I've been enjoying some of your poetry and prose here, very awesome! I live in southern Colorado, it's becoming more like fall every day, I love autumn. I occasionally mess around with poetry or prose , I don't know what you would call this one......I am alone, on you I dwell,I cannot sleep, I cannot feel,only you, only you, keep me alive wanna be, by your side ,keep me near, always will ,by your side I'll be there still. I don't know, what do any of you all think? I keep things short and sweet! Hope to"meet" some new buds, fellow jammers like myself. Pearl Jam is an awesome band to me because they do write and create songs for the intense. laters,,,,,
I waited all day, you waited all day, but you left before sunset. And I just wanted to tell you the moment was beautiful. Just wanted to dance to bad music drive bad cars... watch bad tv...should have stayed for the sunset if not for me. [Vitology cd]
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I liked it, Lithe! It's simple in a very good way...not saying any more than needs said. Keep posting 'em!

    Welcome to the board! It's nice to have you. We have a lot of fun here!
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  • lithe1439lithe1439 Posts: 5
    Hey you liked it! So which is it to you, prose or poetry? Thanks for the welcome I feel warm. I'm looking forward to a nice experience here I've been part of only one other internet community, thecatsite!hahaha I like my cats alot I guess. So besides our common interest, pearl jam, what do you like? Well nice to meet you I'll write another poem or prose soon, lithe
    I waited all day, you waited all day, but you left before sunset. And I just wanted to tell you the moment was beautiful. Just wanted to dance to bad music drive bad cars... watch bad tv...should have stayed for the sunset if not for me. [Vitology cd]
  • brain of cbrain of c Posts: 5,213
    keep up the good work.;)
    d'oh!!!!!!

    http://www.myspace.com/brain_of_c
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    I sent you a PM, do you know how to get it? :)
  • Medicated-GeniusMedicated-Genius Posts: 359
    welcome to ya sista/brudda!! ?
  • FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    welcome lithe, looking forward to reading some of your poetry. share away
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Originally posted by lithe1439
    Hey you liked it! So which is it to you, prose or poetry?


    I'd call it poetry, but really, whatever you think it is, well, that's what it is!
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  • lithe1439lithe1439 Posts: 5
    FALL autumn... leaves,rain, snow, me, you. falling.. dusty leaves,raindrops,sleety snow,lonely me, lucky you...... fell.. winter, covered leaves, icy raindrops, snow, snow.. happy me, wonderful you. I tiried to do this list style, hope you all llike it. Nice to be part of the group, by the way thanks for the welcome!
    I waited all day, you waited all day, but you left before sunset. And I just wanted to tell you the moment was beautiful. Just wanted to dance to bad music drive bad cars... watch bad tv...should have stayed for the sunset if not for me. [Vitology cd]
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    Welcome lithe1439...!!!

    pull up a chair and a tea and join us.

    I look forward to reading more of your poems in the near future!!!
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    Hello! your work is poetry, definitely.
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Originally posted by lithe1439
    FALL autumn... leaves,rain, snow, me, you. falling.. dusty leaves,raindrops,sleety snow,lonely me, lucky you...... fell.. winter, covered leaves, icy raindrops, snow, snow.. happy me, wonderful you.


    quite sweet

    thank You :)
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