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dead man;s prophecy

sandmansandman Posts: 80
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
dead man’s prophecy…….
Ashamed ,
Disturbed,
Broken,
Naked,
Lost,
Lonely,
Dead,
Thoughts,
Lifeless,
Cold,
Nauseous,
Late,
Black,
Red,
Yellow,
Sad,
Whales,
Fatal,
Fading,
Footsteps,
Drifting,
Deeply,
Sleep,
Dream,
Dirty,
Unknown,
Obsession,
Stained,
Parachutes,
Young,
Grown,
Old,
Blind,
Deaf,
Dumb,
Red mosquito,
Dark horse,
Yellow Ledbetter
Iris,
Kisses,
Angels,
Satan,
Jesus’,
Heaven,
Hell,
Blood,
Indifference,
I,
Me,
Myself,
Sun,
Moon,
Earth,
Eclipse,
Poles,
Periphery,
Supernova,
Rye,
Prayers,
Walls,
Fights,
Colors,
Rise,
Fall,
Time,
Air,
Glass hole,
Time warp,
Casualties,
Friends & foes,
Circles,
Tribes,
Bees,
Imagine,
Wash,
Love,
Turn,
Spin,
Flowers,
Hazy,
Fire,
Fog,
Chill,
Winter,
Bloom,
Lithium,
Rape,
Seeds,
Of life,
Education question¿,
Moonlight,
Lies,
Phones,
Sex,
Radio,
Lust,
Homo-?,
Butterfly,
Sugar,
Drowning,
Crazy,
Escape,
White,
Elephants,
Surrender,
Run,
Lullaby,
Wide open,
Wind,
Whistles,
Flute,
Free,
Unwanted,
Unexplained,
Lies,
Mainliner,
Man eater,
Fly,
Candles,
Infant in heaven,
Sinner,
Unborn dead,
Cry,
Thorn,
King,
Queen,
Prince,
Darkness,
Crown of thorns,
The cross,
Crucifix,
Least,
Last,
Pain,
Hawk,
Threads,
Somewhere,
Flashes,
Thunders,
Above,
War,
Hate,
Armies,
Death,
World wars,
Prophecy,
Of a,
Dead man………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………Bags & boxes have been packed. I don’t want to stay here. Sounds of a piano being played in the darkness.
My sadness shows on my face.
Slow footsteps, so that I don’t wake anybody up. I don’t belong here. My cancer has been eating my insides since I was an 8 year old. 7 years later, my time has come. I can’t live like this. Rejected, by all those who can.
My footsteps will be washed away. I kept your picture in my pocket when it should have been framed.
I should leave now, never to return.
Goodbye.


The end..
shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
move away into the fucken tornado.
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Comments

  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    u remind me of someone.....anyonés guess?......hehehehehe....ain't life grand........

    and the dead shall arise
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    whom do i remind u of?


    the dead never leave..they are always there.
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    i like they way you intermingled song titles in the body of the poem. imho it evokes all the emotion contained in a piece of music in one word.

    great work.

    i hope that you decide to take up residence here in the poetry forum. :)
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    i do....
    i love the band.
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    jus some dead guy.....(must be delusional again.....down spot.....I mean out spot)......heheheheheeheheh.....don't worry about it.....should wear off soon......I realise I'm being cryptic.....hehehehehe
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    ...........
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    nah..its ok to be cryptic anyway.
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    light
    desert
    flowers
    heat
    snakes
    ladders
    heaven
    jacob
    desire
    fumbling
    rumbling
    thunder
    Apollo
    lightning
    Terror
    home
    heart
    Texas
    Ireland
    sadness
    sandman
    scorpion
    beauty and peace
    forever
    healing
    stealing beauty
    reeling
    feeling love
    clouds
    the far pavilions
    shyness
    Torin
    joy
    bliss
    forever
    John
    and
    raising
    dough
    yeast
    beast
    least
    feast
    first
    thirst
    worst
    desert
    wine
    divine
    divining
    dining
    now
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    i still cant read any of your replies..
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    alright..
    that was good..
    although mine wasnt supposed to make any sense.
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    it made sense to me.....are you saying mine made sense......to fukkin who?
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    ...
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    mine made sense?
    it doesnt make sense to me,
    what do u understand about me after reading it?
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I don't understand anything about you.....I'm just hanging onto my delusional theory that somehow John showed up on teh board......and wrote something that resonated with me.....(in all honesty)......I don't know you from Adam.....but some of teh wrods u used reminded me of him.......(I am a bear of very little brain)......don't worry about it......I'll be over it in teh monring :)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    ..
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    alright.
    thats fine then, i guess.
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    keep talking like him and you've got a problem though
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    .
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    why do i have a problem if i keep talking like him?
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    STOP!!!

    hehehehehe....nah....I know you're not him really.....fuk if you were I'd sacrifice a lamb
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    ..
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    hey u know....
    im john!!!!








    just kidding..lol :)
    sorry bout that
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    do you have any birthmarks?

    whereabouts?

    lol.....I'm fukkin crazy to be talking to a lunatic like you.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    i hat ehis thing..i have to constantly write replies or i cant read yours
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    woah..u know u could offend somebody that way.
    u dontknow me that well to be calling me a lunatic.
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    who cares.....I can call you what I want.....anyway lunatic is a very underrated noun.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    ...
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    i care.
    if u can call me a lunatic then i have every right to call u babe
    ;pig in the city?
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    go ta fuk and don't come back......

    I love you like a disease......hasta luego, amigo.....

    nice
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • sandmansandman Posts: 80
    ....
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
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