Inspired by Pearl Jam's "Alone"

Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
On the stairs between first and second floors
she stops a breath between past and future.
She resumes after the pause consciously
thinking of this evening's dinner menu.

Within a prepared guest room she removes
his items from a labeled container.
She burns the contents and places remains
in a tray next to cigarette lighters.

Smoke in her eyes causes isolated tears.
Tired, she covers her face with her hands.
She revisits years of wrestled regrets
as stray grey hair brushes her next gold ring.

Pictures circa 1963 burn
with an official note of condolence.
There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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  • Pictures circa 1963 burn
    with an official note of condolence.


    there you go again...ending a poem breathlessly...damn... :)
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  • Eureka! Look what I found! :)
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    Thank you Mr. Carrots! What a sleuth you are. So, here's the example I wanted to show pearljam7.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    i really liked the line

    "in a tray next to cigarette lighters"


    it just sounds so nice n' tight


    very nice :)
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    PastaNazi wrote:
    i really liked the line

    "in a tray next to cigarette lighters"


    it just sounds so nice n' tight


    very nice :)
    Thank you :-) I think this was my best of the Inspired by Pearl Jam poems.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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