"Poetry" by Pablo Neruda

Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
And it was at that age ... Poetry arrived
in search of me. I don't know, I don't know where
it came from, from winter or a river.
I don't know how or when,
no they were not voices, they were not
words, nor silence,
but from a street I was summoned,
from the branches of night,
abruptly from the others,
among violent fires
or returning alone,
there I was without a face
and it touched me.

I did not know what to say, my mouth
had no way
with names,
my eyes were blind,
and something started in my soul,
fever or forgotten wings,
and I made my own way,
deciphering
that fire,
and I wrote the first faint line,
faint, without substance, pure
nonsense,
pure wisdom
of someone who knows nothing,
and suddenly I saw
the heavens
unfastened
and open,
planets,
palpitating plantations,
shadow perforated,
riddled
with arrows, fire and flowers,
the winding night, the universe.

And I, infinitesimal being,
drunk with the great starry
void,
likeness, image of
mystery,
felt myself a pure part
of the abyss,
I wheeled with the stars,
my heart broke loose on the wind.
There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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  • pearlmuttpearlmutt Posts: 392
    hey Bibliobella, I'm poking around in my Fruits and Vegetables by Erica Jong and I thought you might like this:

    (Artichoke, after Neruda)

    It is green at the artichoke heart,
    but remember the times
    you flayed
    leaf after leaf,
    the hoarding the pale silver paste
    behind the fortresses of your teeth,
    tonguing the vinaigrette,
    only to find the husk of a worm
    at the artichoke heart?
    The palate reels like a wronged lover.
    Was all that sweetness counterfeit?
    Must you vomit back
    world after vegetable world
    for the sake of one worm
    in the green garden of the heart?

    (I haven't thought about it too awful much, but the vomiting back world after vegetable world lines bother me -- I don't know what exactly she's saying there.)

    Any thoughts? I am not all that familiar with Neruda and thought maybe that's why I don't get the line.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Epitaph for Fire and Flower (I wonder if it's this Pablo refers to?)


    You might as well haul up

    This wave's green peak on wire

    To prevent fall, or anchor the fluent air

    In quartz, as crack your skull to keep

    These two most perishable lovers from the touch

    That will kindle angels' envy, scorch and drop

    Their fond hearts charred as any match.



    Seek no stony camera-eye to fix

    The passing dazzle of each face

    In black and white, or put on ice

    Mouth's instant flare for future looks;

    Stars shoot their petals, and suns run to seed,

    However you may sweat to hold such darling wrecks

    Hived like honey in your head.



    Now in the crux of their vows hang your ear,

    Still as a shell: hear what an age of glass

    These lovers prophesy to lock embrace

    Secure in museum diamond for the stare

    Of astounded generations; they wrestle

    To conquer cinder's kingdom in the stroke of an hour

    And hoard faith safe in a fossil.



    But though they'd rivet sinews in rock

    And have every weathercock kiss hang fire

    As if to outflame a phoenix, the moment's spur

    Drives niimble blood too quick

    For a wish to tether: they ride nightlong

    In their heartbeats' blazing wake until red cock

    Plucks bare that comet's flowering.



    Dawn snuffs out star's spent wick,

    Even as love's dear fools cry evergreen,

    And a languor of wax congeals the vein

    No matter how fiercely lit; staunch contracts break

    And recoil in the altering light: the radiant limb

    Blows ash in each lover's eye; the ardent look

    Blackens flesh to bone and devours them.




    as for the vomit... I think she means "must you purge everything (in your memory of this love) because you've found one little bad thing in it?" see?



    right on Biblio... i've had this poem in my head today and thought to post it, but... you know... work schmerk... blegh
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    that's Plath, btw... pardon the omission
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    The artichoke
    of delicate heart
    erect
    in its battle-dress, builds
    its minimal cupola;
    keeps
    stark
    in its scallop of
    scales.
    Around it,
    demoniac vegetables
    bristle their thicknesses,
    devise
    tendrils and belfries,
    the bulb's agitations;
    while under the subsoil
    the carrot
    sleeps sound in its
    rusty mustaches.
    Runner and filaments
    bleach in the vineyards,
    whereon rise the vines.
    The sedulous cabbage
    arranges its petticoats;
    oregano
    sweetens a world;
    and the artichoke
    dulcetly there in a gardenplot,
    armed for a skirmish,
    goes proud
    in its pomegranate
    burnishes.
    Till, on a day,
    each by the other,
    the artichoke moves
    to its dream
    of a market place
    in the big willow
    hoppers:
    a battle formation.
    Most warlike
    of defilades-
    with men
    in the market stalls,
    white shirts
    in the soup-greens,
    artichoke field marshals,
    close-order conclaves,
    commands, detonations,
    and voices,
    a crashing of crate staves.

    And
    Maria
    come
    down
    with her hamper
    to
    make trial
    of an artichoke:
    she reflects, she examines,
    she candles them up to the light like an egg,
    never flinching;
    she bargains,
    she tumbles her prize
    in a market bag
    among shoes and a
    cabbage head,
    a bottle
    of vinegar; is back
    in her kitchen.
    The artichoke drowns in a pot.

    So you have it:
    a vegetable, armed,
    a profession
    (call it an artichoke)
    whose end
    is millennial.
    We taste of that
    sweetness,
    dismembering scale after scale.
    We eat of a halcyon paste:
    it is green at the artichoke heart.




    The artichoke in this poem seems to be someone who is more concerned with outward appearances then substance, call it a profession. Yet, since it is green, is it that the artichoke only sees the semblance of greatness and would not know hard work. I wonder if the vomit back is how Neruda's poetry has reached certain levels of familiarity, and he has become after death what he tried not to do in life. At the same time he won the Nobel Prize while still alive so that can't be it. I don't know, it must be her take on either him as a poet or on this poem. Does this Neruda poem shed any light for you?
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • pearlmuttpearlmutt Posts: 392
    Wow! Yes. That's exactly what I didn't know.

    Thank ya very much!
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    thanks Pastor Nazi.....that Plath poem is incredible.....I haven't read any Plath....but that poem is worth so much......I've gotta really read the other ones, but I nearly became delirious when I read that, thank God I've only had one glass of wine.....

    I can't believe it.....who could write like that.....and her husband a lumbering oaf......(as far as I know)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    it's so perfect, I feel like eating the words (okay, I am delirious).....:)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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