Inspired by Jacob Lawrence's The Visitors

Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
This is a surprise. I didn't know she . . .
Thank you for telling me about this. I
hope you like raspberry pie. I bake too
much all the time. Luckily, I have some
leftovers. She always looked a little pale . . .
Yes, thank you for hanging up my coat. I
remarked to my neighbors just the other
day how pale she looked, but I never guessed.
Did you get along as kids? I'm sorry
I didn't hear you. I've seen you stop by
with groceries. I'm sorry, do you need
a handkerchief? I remarked to neighbors
the other day how pale she looked. Did I?
I'm sorry, would you like another slice?



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I hope you can see this picture. Constructive criticism as always is appreciated. Thanks you!
There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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