Natural Consequences

Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
My name is Chris and I am six. I learn
my lesson with burning scars on my back.
He reads the Bible and burns me because
I forgot to hang my coat on the hook.

A flick of the lighter and my arms flinch.
My dad tells neighbors I'm medicated.

My dad always said God is the Father.
My dad always said I have to fear God.
My dad always said he likes to scare me.
I fear my Father so he must be God.

If God smokes cigarettes then God likes Fire.
Gasoline and His lighters do the trick.
Now Father and I will burn together.
Those sirens rejoicing our blessedness.


I started this poem 9 years ago. I don't want to work on it anymore. I've shredded all the notes that went with it, and now I give it up to Internet Eternity. Bye-bye poem!
There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    charles wrote:
    What?????????
    What don't you understand?
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    charles wrote:
    this is the part i don't understand.
    The poem isn't finished, cause you think you can't finish,
    though you have more to say, don't really want give up,
    don't want it to die,
    there's a lot more to it no?
    if so, is it that easy to understand?
    I started this poem after listening to a very violent true
    story about a family. I was a crisis counselor.
    I wanted to change the world and thought I could
    do it with these simple words.
    It was going to be much longer
    much bigger, more characters.
    Whenever I think of that time
    my stomach gets in knots.
    Since I've been past that time
    my stomach is not in knots so much.
    I don't feel the desire to look at the poem
    and remember the actual violence I heard about
    which caused me to write it.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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