Front Gate

Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
No one walked through the front gate unannounced. The squeak of the front gate drew multiple lines through each day like graph paper, and each square filled was one less moment of summer. The front gate separated the patch of grass of our apartment building from the parked cars, which I saw in cycles at the end and the middle of each month. With my eyes closed I could tell the day of the month by how many car doors I heard close.

When the radiator crammed our apartment with unsolicited heat I escaped down three flights of stairs to sit in the shade of the tree near the front gate, waiting for our intimate parade. More strangers sauntered through the front gate in the summer, but with their quick steps they did not seem bothered by the heat. The strangers always greeted me before they continued up to the third floor. They whistled as they walked back out, and I heard car doors quickly close.

Near the front gate I counted the blades of dry grass between the sidewalk cracks. I counted the number of cracks within each sidewalk square. I counted the number of leaves on the shading tree. Looking up was the last way to feel a breeze, and I savored a breeze like dessert after a dinner of meatloaf. At the sound of the front gate squeak I saw the first floor apartment light turn on. When the first floor apartment light turned on the second floor apartment window opened. For a few years I looked for a switch that connected the front gate to the light of the first floor apartment. I never met the person who turned on the first floor apartment light, and once I saw a shadow of the person who opened the second floor apartment window. I expected frowns from these apartments. Only a few times did I open the gate after the sun had set to become as friendly as a stranger.
There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    tchaliz wrote:
    Bella, I like it very much, reminds me when i was a child and my family arrived to a new city, i had no friends and i use to spend lots of time just looking by the window or seating outside somewhere observing, hearing, feeling this new place. thanks for this one.
    T
    You and Mary Oliver inspired me to try my hand at prose poems. So, thanks to you!
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    this is an excellent reminisce.. i read this several times.. thank you. :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    olderman wrote:
    this is an excellent reminisce.. i read this several times.. thank you. :)
    Thanks right back at you, Olderman. :-)
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • I enjoyed reading this very much, it's something many of us can relate to.
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