First poem you posted in this Forum

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  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    Ms. Haiku wrote:
    This may be one of my favorite ones I wrote.

    Inspired by Pearl Jam's "Alone"


    On the stairs between first and second floors
    she stops a breath between past and future.
    She resumes after the pause consciously
    thinking of this evening's dinner menu.

    Within a prepared guest room she removes
    his items from a labeled container.
    She burns the contents and places remains
    in a tray next to cigarette lighters.

    Smoke in her eyes causes isolated tears.
    Tired, she covers her face with her hands.
    She revisits years of wrestled regrets
    as stray grey hair brushes her next gold ring.

    Pictures circa 1963 burn
    with an official note of condolence.

    that's beautiful maria.. the imagery is so very real. :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • Here's mine...no one ever replied to it...during my Bukwoski phase...glad that's over. :D


    "2:57 AM poem"
    In the vein of Bukowski



    well, I've rolled another cigarette
    and drunk beyond remorse
    time to sit on the back balcony
    and think about the snow
    falling down
    like me
    on yet another weekend
    failure to step up
    and say,
    "hey, do you want to?"

    God,
    it's been so long
    and so many nights
    I've listened to the voice I need to hear
    but never my own
    and the screams that lie within

    time to smoke that cig
    time to rip that butt

    the cancer that will eat away
    the promise you hold now

    for what?

    shit

    time to go out back and figure it out
    before it's too late

    or is it?

    there's still time...

    yeah, right.
    Teamwork. Rawk. Pwnage. Infinite Possibilities. YIELD. Hells yeah.
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