My sun, My son

ExTReMe FrEAkExTReMe FrEAk Posts: 118
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
As I feel myself floating through the clouds
I take the time to realize there is complete silence
I feel the moister from the clouds settle on my body
I look at the sun through my eye lids
I get a very warm feeling through my whole body
As I lay here in the clouds, I think of nothing
My body begins to get more relaxed
My legs seem to disappear
I think on this, while I’m still relaxed
They are floating away in the clouds
Once I feel this through my mind, it begins to happen to my arms
They begin floating away into nothing
It makes me feel better
I now feel my body start to do the same thing
It’s drifting and floating, away from me
It’s just me and my head, with the radiant sun
I feel my head begin to vanish
I am still here, but my head is leaving
How odd this is, but there’s still beauty in the sun
My head is now gone, it’s just me my sun

My sun, my son, your beauty still comes
I see all around, and you are my son
Although you had left, I have now come
You fill my spirit with the warmth of the sun
Just relax, take a hold of this cord
The silver still shimmers for you and your mom
Take it please, and go to your mom
My time will come, to join you my son

I wrote this tonight, thank you for reading this. It’s a very hard thing to write out for me. It was a very powerful event.
Chasing a trail of smoke and reason.
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Comments

  • Thank you for your poem. The feeling, spiritual and visceral, of birthgiving pervades this piece.

    I look forward to reading more of your work.


    :)
  • Thank you for your kindness. I have a feeling you will see a lot of my work here.
    Chasing a trail of smoke and reason.
  • Drops of Moonshine

    The incense burning
    As the flame dances on its wick
    The alter seems so beautiful

    The cloak seems to flow
    As the tip of the knife begins to carve
    The markings begin to show

    The wood seems softer
    As the shapes come together
    The stone work is beautiful

    The water is pure
    As oil and salt blend under candle light
    The energy begins to rise

    My body now pulses
    As energies now increase
    The spirits are kind

    The love is showing
    As sun sets in the distance
    The woods now glow

    My soul is released
    As the animals come to watch
    How lovely they look on this sunset

    My body falls limp
    As I ascend above
    The glaze is perfect

    My understanding grows
    As I become a drop in the collective
    My journey is complete
    Chasing a trail of smoke and reason.
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