Forever young with the sun
ExTReMe FrEAk
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The night cries out for a glimpse of day light
As the day begs for a time which it slept
Since before our lives the sun has been bright
And the dew in the dark has always crept
Lives passed and came at their own willingness
Yet it seems I have always remained here
Light brings warmth, night brings comforting caress
Sitting by two powers brings on some wear
I feel as though my age is catching me
Aches and pains from mysterious places
Oh in my youth, I truly had been free
If I could just flip back a few pages
When I have become youthful forever
Light and Dark, we’ll always be together
As the day begs for a time which it slept
Since before our lives the sun has been bright
And the dew in the dark has always crept
Lives passed and came at their own willingness
Yet it seems I have always remained here
Light brings warmth, night brings comforting caress
Sitting by two powers brings on some wear
I feel as though my age is catching me
Aches and pains from mysterious places
Oh in my youth, I truly had been free
If I could just flip back a few pages
When I have become youthful forever
Light and Dark, we’ll always be together
Chasing a trail of smoke and reason.
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Anyone care to post any other sonnets here?
Lovely control of the form in expression of the theme there, by the way. The sonnet's the true test of poet ability, I ultimately feel (but don't tell anyone I said that... shhhhh).