Seasoned Mind

ExTReMe FrEAkExTReMe FrEAk Posts: 118
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
He had gone to the wild to settle his mind
For days and nights, growing wise to the way
With never a thought, what he left behind
Resting his mind, from his path he won’t stray
Shadows wrap around him entirely
He’s charmed the night to accompany him
Light strains snap a thought, you should cry for me
The trees respond, For you, we bow our limbs

Their leaves had fell, as they wept for the night
The winds then chilled, leaving tears on the ground
The man then was covered in a bright white
Radiance so bright, life sprang all around
As all the seasons all come and then go
This man takes their lives, to help them grow
Chasing a trail of smoke and reason.
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  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    Originally posted by ExTReMe FrEAk
    He had gone to the wild to settle his mind
    For days and nights, growing wise to the way
    With never a thought, what he left behind
    Resting his mind, from his path he won’t stray
    Shadows wrap around him entirely
    He’s charmed the night to accompany him
    Light strains snap a thought, you should cry for me
    The trees respond, For you, we bow our limbs

    Their leaves had fell, as they wept for the night
    The winds then chilled, leaving tears on the ground
    The man then was covered in a bright white
    Radiance so bright, life sprang all around
    As all the seasons all come and then go
    This man takes their lives, to help them grow

    powerful images
    deep meanings
    beautiful poem
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
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