lost appeal

crzymarypj10crzymarypj10 Posts: 12
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
im tired of this falling rain
and this lost cause that i some how feel will sustain
ive tried but you never wanted to play
so ill put away my pieces and let you go on your way
i thought this dream was real
i guess i lost my appeal
where will you go when you leave
where do you hide away
i guess ill spend my time alone
to feel what i cannot say

so this is it and now its clear
how love could feel so right but lose its appeal
i know youve made up your mind and im not in your heart
but just remeber one thing i will always keep you in the back of my mind
i will always keep your time
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Comments

  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I like this one. It can be very hard to find true love. It seems this board is full of broken hearts on a regular basis.
  • VEDHEAD27VEDHEAD27 Posts: 3,091
    Damn! :( I've sooo felt this before crzymarypj10.


    so ill put away my pieces and let you go on your way
    i thought this dream was real
    i guess i lost my appeal
    where will you go when you leave
    where do you hide away
    i guess ill spend my time alone
    to feel what i cannot say


    Sooo heartbreaking & powerful!!

    I like this one a lot too. Another brutally honest piece, but arranged in such a beeeautiful intriguing way.

    Thank you for sharing. :)
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    "Lo√e, you know the word
    ...YOU invented it!" ~ E√

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    ...::STONE--YOU--OWN!::...
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