~ Five ~ ~ ~ Horizons ~

BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Silence hides
beneath the voice of wine. . .

Find me in words
never spoken. . .
I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
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  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    Pull out the blind man's eyes.
    Place them in front of you.
    You shall see the ghost of cursed,
    wearing black boots
    and walking through
    the forest of unknown


    Rip out the dead man's heart
    and you shall see me,
    sitting on a rock
    and looking at myself
    in the twisted mirror
    of the empty dust
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    Black embroidery
    of the midnight violin
    covers my
    melancholic eyes
    for not to see
    the dreams writhe

    Hold my hand...
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    Life trapped by the stormy haze
    Will I ever escape this maze?

    The burden of Life is mine to bear
    Diamond shoes were mine to wear

    In the Life's fake grace
    I saw the demon's smiling face

    Lost is the sense of gesture
    that forms a smile



    If I never make it
    You find the door & brake it

    With the mysterious black veil
    cover the desert & my eyes pale

    Bury my soul deep in the sands
    when the moonlight night descends

    One cigarette and inhaled smoke
    A promise never meant to be broke

    But the beast inside, still hopes & fights
    Kill it! Before in deep despair dies

    Why to turn my self into a marble stone
    When I never asked to be born...

    Lost is the sense of gesture
    that forms a smile
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    Far beyond the veil of tears
    the queen of the desert
    sinks into the realm
    of the voice of the mystic

    Breathless...
    with silver shadows
    in her pale hands
    she paints your name
    upon the canvas
    of the woven dreams

    In her eyes
    somewhere between
    dream & reality
    eternaly embraced
    the voice of the mystic
    sleeps...
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    See the invisable
    Touch the unreachable

    ...The Breath is Mine...

    Forget the unforgetable
    Hear the unspeakable

    ...The Word is Thine...
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    these are my favourite poems I've read here so far.....so far I like these best of all......I find them.....mysterious.....prophetic.....dark.......but most of all poetic....there's an intangible lightness to them......like Dream Whip.....and a dolorous musicality.....they have history
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    And this was the best and closest description of someone's view upon my poetry...

    You indeed understand.

    Thank you... Thank you so very much...
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • i thought all of your pieces were so intense and brilliant. i like reading poems that you have to really think about where the author is coming from. all of your poems evoke strong and mysterious images and a darker, sadder side of thought. but they are so well put together and quite beautifully put. by the way, BLACK is my all time favorite PJ tune.
    Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow?
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    THE END


    I looked at myself in the mirror.
    ...Where am i?...
    Why i can't see anything?
    I can't see myself!
    ...just an dirty,empty face...

    The clouds are burning.
    I'm flying through the fire flames.
    But i'm cold...i'm frozen...
    I can't feel the heat...
    I'm flying dead.

    Red tears are washing away my life.
    Before i die,come to me.
    Come and save me,
    so i can leave this world
    with a smile on my face.

    I do not belong here...anymore...
    I belong to the world of Nowhere.
    I shall flow with the Nahrier to my world.
    And You...
    Bury me in the eye of the eternity.

    My mission is over.

    B rake the door.
    L ight the candle.
    A nswer the question.
    C lose the book
    K ill the beast.

    I found a diamond key.
    I shall now open the gate of "THE END".
    You are not welcome there.
    This dream is lost in my hair.
    The dance will never end...
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    Black light at the Black street.
    Black candle in the Black night.
    Black shadow on the Black wall.
    Black loneliness in the Black prison.
    Black freedom in the Black circle.
    Black veil on the Black bed.
    Black fear in the Black dream.
    Black sadness in the Black thought.
    Black woman in the Black dress.
    Black tear on the Black face.
    Black butterfly in the Black heart.
    Black poison in the Black body.
    Black death in the Black room.

    Blue indifference...
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    Originally posted by PJGirl2004
    i thought all of your pieces were so intense and brilliant. i like reading poems that you have to really think about where the author is coming from. all of your poems evoke strong and mysterious images and a darker, sadder side of thought. but they are so well put together and quite beautifully put. by the way, BLACK is my all time favorite PJ tune.

    That was a very nice statement.. thank you :)

    Oh and yeah about Black, so is mine... that's why I have it as a part of my nick anyway ;)
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    The mystic sounds of your soul
    makes my desire grow & grow

    My destiny is what you are, I know
    I can hear your endless call

    On our strange meeting
    the universe shall hear my heart beating

    I shall kneel down with the dawn
    for your kingdom is my only home

    And I shall kiss you with my tears
    to chase away all of our fears

    The softness of your touch
    is what I crave for so much

    In the secret of your eternal eye
    my silhouette is what you hide

    By the light of the sun
    your uncrowned queen shall come

    And it will be forever the two of us
    just as it was written in the stars


    M A K T U B
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • suedesuede Posts: 247
    Originally posted by BlackSin
    On our strange meeting
    the universe shall hear my heart beating

    Awesome lines.

    M A K T U B <---what's that mean?
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    Maktub in arabic means... hm it's not quite as 'destiny' but like 'it was meant to be' , which is kinda destiny... if this makes any sense...
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • suedesuede Posts: 247
    cool! :)
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    Originally posted by BlackSin
    The mystic sounds of your soul
    makes my desire grow & grow

    My destiny is what you are, I know
    I can hear your endless call

    On our strange meeting
    the universe shall hear my heart beating

    I shall kneel down with the dawn
    for your kingdom is my only home

    And I shall kiss you with my tears
    to chase away all of our fears

    The softness of your touch
    is what I crave for so much

    In the secret of your eternal eye
    my silhouette is what you hide

    By the light of the sun
    your uncrowned queen shall come

    And it will be forever the two of us
    just as it was written in the stars


    M A K T U B

    these are all beautiful, some darkly beautiful, yes...but they all had me holding my breath while i read them. i like them all, but especially this one...or this one kind of gave me hope, i should say.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    hm... you may find it weird, but that one I wrote for the desert... Hopeful indeed... at least for me and glad it is for you as well ;)
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    In the desert
    around the fire

    in the night
    made of desire

    i'll put the Black veil
    down on the sand

    and I shall dance for u
    till the time ends
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    He came out of the shadows,
    kneeled by my bed,
    and woke me up silently :
    "...Let's take a walk,
    it's a beautiful dream outhere..."


    I took his hand...
    And there we were,
    under the moon,
    dancing in the embrace
    of the magic moonlight.

    Secret whispers of the silence
    surrounded us...
    Eternal fire made a circle around us.

    No one can't get close

    ...No mortal...No God...

    He took off my black dress.
    And there i stood
    in front of him...
    Naked...
    Hidden in the golden veil
    of the candle flame.

    I saw his shiny smile.
    I felt his arms around me,
    his touch so warm...
    He kisses my forehead,
    my eyes, my nose, my lips,
    my neck...

    We were breathing
    the perfume
    of the purpule satin
    of the Dream.

    I layed him down
    on the bed of roses.
    The roses he gave to me.
    Offered him
    the red wine of the Life.

    I felt his lips
    drinking the wine from my body,
    while i was caressing
    his silky hair.

    The stars became jealous.
    The Gods became mortals.

    And we were laughing at them
    while drinking the red wine of The Life
    hidden in the mystic bed of roses.

    And we shall stay there.

    "...Till Death find us kissing..."
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I just watched The English Patient......I'm in love with Arabia......and the desert.......I'm in love with love.......and you are wonderful!!!!!
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    Wonderful is what your replies are... Thank you ISN

    *blows you a kiss*
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    A girl cries
    only in the rain
    Therefore No One
    can see her pain
    For this world
    is nothing
    but a harlot
    will she give up?
    I tell you: "Not"
    Lionhearted hope
    lies down, lifeless...
    she will survive
    the harlots madness

    For one thing
    she believes in:

    "Dreams do come true,
    only if you make them to"
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    With hands tied
    & bitter voice
    I pray for rain
    to fall down
    & erase the name
    stealthily written
    in the pale sand
    inside of my heart

    The rain
    falls...

    The name
    fades...


    The pain
    remains...
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    With the rising
    of a new dawn
    you made me bleed,
    ...with your fairy blade

    Thru the smoke
    of the last cigarette
    I stare at your eyes

    ... as they fade ...
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    Ah, McCain, you've done it again!!!!
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Originally posted by BlackSin
    A girl cries
    only in the rain
    Therefore No One
    can see her pain
    For this world
    is nothing
    but a harlot
    will she give up?
    I tell you: "Not"
    Lionhearted hope
    lies down, lifeless...
    she will survive
    the harlots madness

    For one thing
    she believes in:

    "Dreams do come true,
    only if you make them to"

    :) Melikey! Good stuff here, BlackSin! Keep it up! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • BlackSinBlackSin Posts: 83
    Your core
    hidden in a deep hole of universe

    Can't it hear the voices of unknown?
    They scream and moan
    And their echo makes you feel pain

    Enter inside my brain, follow the flash

    What's in there?

    White circle spinning,
    Tempting you to walk thru

    I saw the lake laying on the clouds,
    resting,
    smoothly swallowing the sun beams.

    Find it for me!
    Find me the heartbeat of immortality !

    I saw the dolphin
    It was frozen...
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • In the gleam of night
    where the steps of time
    are turned into Black
    and the sweet silence
    is broken in pieces
    there
    the frozen sin awakes
    & in agony craves
    for just one glimpse
    & touch of ur fingertips
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • Last night,
    walking through the visual horizon
    i called for him.
    And...he was there.

    Last night,
    laughing with the lost ghosts
    i needed him.
    And ...he was there.

    Last night,
    spinning between the flying sheets
    i wanted him.
    And ...he was there.

    Last night,
    talking with the Black butterfly
    i've realized
    ...something...

    Last night
    He was there.
    Last night
    He was Everywhere.

    One night,
    that night,
    last night
    He wasn't... here...
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • There is warmth that never was felt
    But its taste remains... the same...
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
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