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i just don't get it...

violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
edited July 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
nevermind....................................................
You ask me to enter
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    let go
    open your hands
    embrace the unknown
    throw loose the shutters
    it's summer and the sun wants in
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    PastaNazi wrote:
    let go
    open your hands
    embrace the unknown
    throw loose the shutters
    it's summer and the sun wants in

    sometimes too much sun...

    like your sig says "mix the light"

    The darkness
    it fills me up
    it weighs me down
    it keeps me going
    it makes me stop
    it drives me
    it controls my every move
    it is the one working me
    i have no soul
    i have no spirit
    the darkness is you

    --anonymous
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • the unseenthe unseen Posts: 372
    too much sun?
    bah.
    only because one doesnt want to see
    what is no longer hidden in the shadows
    take the blinders off
    stop seeing things in tunnel vision
    blinded by the black and white
    has you bumping into walls
    hi-def techno colour is where its at
    even scarlett had sense to run
    when atlanta burned around her
  • FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
    *WHISTLE**!!!

    time out.
    What we've got here is failure to communicate. Some men you just can't reach, so you get what we had here last week which is the way he wants it. Well, he gets it. And I don't like it any more than you men.

    ever watch 'cool hand luke'?

    resume play.(tongue-in-cheek)

    **WHISTLE*!!!
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    Felicity wrote:
    *WHISTLE**!!!

    time out.



    ever watch 'cool hand luke'?

    resume play.(tongue-in-cheek)

    **WHISTLE*!!!

    i'm a little confused...not sure where that quote came from...? last week?
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Who does get it?
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    Ali wrote:
    Who does get it?


    //////////////////////////////////////////////
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    Ali wrote:
    Who does get it?
    so right you are.

    today is new leaf day.





    you hear that PN?

    you hear that unseen?

    if for nothing else, so you guys can stop banging your heads against the wall trying to talk to me
    __________________
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    but but but
    it's such a soft and wonderful endeavor
    banging up against this wall
    i only hope i doesn't irk, yes?

    i miss water's, btw... so f'n public, here
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    PastaNazi wrote:
    but but but
    it's such a soft and wonderful endeavor
    banging up against this wall
    i only hope i doesn't irk, yes?

    i miss water's, btw... so f'n public, here
    ]

    you never irk

    and i miss water's too...
    good ol' days.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    id give my life tonight to hold you in my arms again
    trixter
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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