thoughts that spin this morning...

violet ray

play tough guy
play evil all you want
go ahead
i've seen what you really are
you can call it an act
i don't believe it
maybe it's changed
who am i to say
especially now
when i'm not allowed in
but i've seen what's inside
and i know its still there
you're keeping it down
away, out of sight
maybe even from yourself
for whatever reasons
and i'll probably never know them
but i know its in there
however deep its buried
it was...is...a very special part of you
don't let go of it totally
whether i'm the one or not
that gets to see it again
its too special to lose
i would have known
how to appreciate it
how to take care of it
how to make you want to keep it
but...well.
i'd like one more glimpse
it meant so much
i'd like more than a glimpse
you know that
but if i can't have anything else
i'd settle for a proper goodbye
with the you i used to know
with the you i'll love forever
__________________

violet ray

If I could hold you now
Just for a moment, if I could really make you mine
Just for a while, turn back the hands of time
If I could only hold you now
-DC

Righteous Jammer

Very nice poem...violet ray

violet ray

a poet wrote:

Very nice poem...violet ray

thank you:)
i wouldn't call it a poem (i don't know how to write)...just some thoughts...

the unseen

resitant to change
wondering why the words
keep dancing on the page
untill finally, the candle blown out
replaced with a sixty watter
images soften
eyes less strained
headaches gone
progress.....
aint it wonderfull
tis the time of the k
get yo ass outta that cave.......

violet ray

the unseen wrote:

resitant to change
wondering why the words
keep dancing on the page
untill finally, the candle blown out
replaced with a sixty watter
images soften
eyes less strained
headaches gone
progress.....
aint it wonderfull
tis the time of the k
get yo ass outta that cave.......

i wish, i wish, i wish, i wish...
i don't even know what i wish anymore...

the unseen

the most well known wisher upon stars person i can think of is that wooden boy with the nose that made the girls smile.....

even he realized wishing doesnt make things happen,action does.



or lies......

depending on how hot the babe he was with was......

violet ray

i wish i knew exactly what your other reply meant...

nailz100

Nice poem Violet....I guess the good thing is that you got to see (whatever it was) in him

lovin kind

to in hiding

did you know that if your male and you have grown a beard and shave it
it causes a twitch in your brain that reaches for the scissors and the first piece of hair you cut in the front or back cuts the other

true story from doctor theadore m. bald

violet ray

nailz100 wrote:

Nice poem Violet....I guess the good thing is that you got to see (whatever it was) in him

good...in a bittersweet way i guess. i miss it though.

violet ray

lovin kind wrote:

to in hiding

did you know that if your male and you have grown a beard and shave it
it causes a twitch in your brain that reaches for the scissors and the first piece of hair you cut in the front or back cuts the other

true story from doctor theadore m. bald

i think you and unseen are trying to confuse me today?
maybe my brain finally went...

nailz100

You're not the only one....I am confused as well

the unseen

violet ray wrote:

i wish i knew exactly what your other reply meant...

yea,well......

i feel like frankenstien,trying to bring the dead back to life.....


forgive me for being rusty with my words.

pearlmutt

"get yo ass outta that cave......."

the only cave I know of is the one of illusions from the great old analogy. The one that really hurts to leave, it hurts to return, it hurts that old cave.

Anyway, it illustrates the idea of what happens when you see the truth, then try to speak it -- it's painful as the old cliche goes.

"the most well known wisher upon stars person i can think of is that wooden boy with the nose that made the girls smile....."

that's funny.

violet ray

the unseen wrote:

yea,well......

i feel like frankenstien,trying to bring the dead back to life.....


forgive me for being rusty with my words.

oh, my friend...you should know by now...there is nothing wrong with your words. its my brain. remember?

violet ray

pearlmutt wrote:

"get yo ass outta that cave......."

the only cave I know of is the one of illusions from the great old analogy. The one that really hurts to leave, it hurts to return, it hurts that old cave.

Anyway, it illustrates the idea of what happens when you see the truth, then try to speak it -- it's painful as the old cliche goes.

"the most well known wisher upon stars person i can think of is that wooden boy with the nose that made the girls smile....."

that's funny.

unseen is a funny one alright...