jumbled little plea

violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i don't need to see anymore
i already know
what do you gain
by putting on this show
you told me once, you told me twice
stopping right now would be really nice
of you
i'm done
i'm gone from the picture
you won
i lost
have fun

please leave me alone
it was already too hard
more than i imagined
let me move on
stop shoving it in my face
keep your cruel little laughter
behind your closed little doors
its hard enough knowing its there
but to keep showing me?
its really not fair
and its cold

keep your private stuff private
i needed to see
so i could believe,
so i could move on
but enough is enough

please stop sending me
your wicked spew
You ask me to enter
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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Comments

  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    good imagery violet, nicely done!
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • iluvcatsiluvcats Posts: 5,153
    gosh
    :(
    Originally posted by violet ray
    i don't need to see anymore
    i already know
    what do you gain
    by putting on this show
    you told me once, you told me twice
    stopping right now would be really nice
    of you
    i'm done
    i'm gone from the picture
    you won
    i lost
    have fun

    please leave me alone
    it was already too hard
    more than i imagined
    let me move on
    stop shoving it in my face
    keep your cruel little laughter
    behind your closed little doors
    its hard enough knowing its there
    but to keep showing me?
    its really not fair
    and its cold

    keep your private stuff private
    i needed to see
    so i could believe,
    so i could move on
    but enough is enough

    please stop sending me
    your wicked spew
    9/98, 9/00 - DC, 4/03 - Pitt., 7/03 - Bristow, 10/04 - Reading, 10/05 - Philly, 5/06 - DC, 6/06 - Pitt., 6/08 - Va Beach, 6/08 - DC, 5/10 - Bristow, 10/13 B'more
    8/08 - Ed solo in DC, 6/09 Ed in B'more,
    10/10 - Brad in B'more
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