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out of control

violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i'm spinning
everything is twisted
my mind can't grasp
how this could happen
or why this would happen
again
and my heart...
its full of *splinters*
why would you give
and then take away
only to give
and then take away
again
when all i wanted
was to give back
when all I wanted
was you
You ask me to enter
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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  • cltaylor12cltaylor12 Posts: 125
    (Boy Album - Studio Version)
    Music: U2, Lyrics: Bono.
    Monday morning
    Eighteen years of dawning
    I say how long
    I say how long

    It was one dull morning
    Woke the world with bawling
    I was so sad / So sad
    They were so glad

    I was of a feeling it was out of control
    I had the opinion it was out of control

    Boys and girls
    Go to school and those
    Remain children
    But not this one

    I was of a feeling it was out of control
    I had the opinion it was out of control

    I was of a feeling it was out of control
    I had the opinion it was out of control

    (You take my heart away)

    Out of control
    Out of control
    Out of control
    Out of control

    Out of control

    I fought fate
    There's blood on the garden gate
    The man said childhood
    It's in his childhood

    One day I'll die
    The choice will not be mine
    Will it be too late
    You can't fight fate

    I was of a feeling it was out of control
    I had the opinion it was out of control
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    people can't give what they don't have


    sorry, hon



    hugs to you
  • rubyruby Posts: 103
    I was thinking of the U2 song as well...if people can take...they should be able to give too...I dunno. Being out of control is good sometimes.
  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    Wow violet Ray You really do understand, I didnt read this until after I posted my poems on my thread Bliss and Confusion.
    I feel for ya hun, as you know.
    Very beautifully written.
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    Originally posted by PJfaninmaine
    Wow violet Ray You really do understand, I didnt read this until after I posted my poems on my thread Bliss and Confusion.
    I feel for ya hun, as you know.
    Very beautifully written.

    thanks pjfan...
    yes, i think i do understand...
    although i think don't know anything anymore...
    ya know?

    :rolleyes:
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    ya I know. haha. Have to laugh about it once in a while,
    not good to stay down in the dumps all the time.
    (((((((HAVE TO FIND A HAPPY PLACE, NOW WHERE DID I PUT IT?)))))))))))
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • A HitchHiker PoetA HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
    Love this poem..Thanks for sharin
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • cltaylor12cltaylor12 Posts: 125
    I neglected to compliment violet ray in my previous post.... my bad.

    Very well done violet ray! Two thumbs up.
  • Medicated-GeniusMedicated-Genius Posts: 359
    I know how that is :(
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