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love me tender, hate me raw

violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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You ask me to enter
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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Comments

  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Hey Violet Ray this is like the third piece ive read of yours, and its really good, i like your style.
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    thank you mr. pyjama
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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