her crazy little world

violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
silly little girl
at the circus
she watches him juggle
and wonders how
the magician is next
and she wonders again
and then she cries
the confusion is just too much
for her tired little soul
You ask me to enter
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    good stuff violet, hope your character finds out that her soul is bigger and stronger than maybe she realizes at the moment.
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    and the rollercoaster makes her throw up
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    Originally posted by violet ray
    and the rollercoaster makes her throw up

    I like regular rollercoasters a little, but not the kind you're talking about:\


    blegh:/
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I dug this a lot. Thanks!
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  • the unseenthe unseen Posts: 372
    the little girl
    head full of wonder
    at the juggler and magician
    wanders blindly around the big top
    stumbles upon the lion cage
    open mouth looks inviting
    sticks her head in
    hot breath on her neck
    the last thing she remembers
    too bad she didnt see
    the sign on the cage
    please dont feed the animals

    unknown to her
    the tent is filled
    with howls of laughter
    as the clowns
    entertain with their antics
  • LyreLyre Posts: 14
    Fat man sitting on a little stool
    Takes the money from my hand while his eyes take a walk all over you
    Hands me the ticket smiles and whispers good luck
    Cuddle up angel cuddle up my little dove
    We'll ride down baby into this tunnel of love

    I can feel the soft silk of your blouse
    And them soft thrills in our little fun house
    Then the lights go out and it's just the three of us
    You me and all that stuff we're so scared of
    Gotta ride down baby into this tunnel of love

    There's a crazy mirror showing us both in 5-D
    I'm laughing at you you're laughing at me
    There's a room of shadows that gets so dark brother
    It's easy for two people to lose each other in this tunnel of love

    It ought to be easy, ought to be simple enough
    Man meets woman and they fall in love
    But the house is haunted and the ride gets rough
    And you've got to learn to live with what you can't rise above
    if you want to ride on down in through this tunnel of love

    -bruce
    just because you like pearl jam doesn't mean you're not a douche - PineappleAna
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    but the lion's cage
    it had everything
    she thought she needed
    she saw tenderness in his eyes
    they said he loved her
    the thrill of the risk
    and the hot breath on her neck
    it wasn't supposed to be dangerous
    it was supposed to be home
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    It ought to be easy, ought to be simple enough
    Man meets woman and they fall in love
    But the house is haunted and the ride gets rough
    And you've got to learn to live with what you can't rise above
    if you want to ride on down in through this tunnel of love




    i guess that is bruce, as in springsteen?
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    Originally posted by violet ray
    It ought to be easy, ought to be simple enough
    Man meets woman and they fall in love
    But the house is haunted and the ride gets rough
    And you've got to learn to live with what you can't rise above
    if you want to ride on down in through this tunnel of love




    i guess that is bruce, as in springsteen?

    uhuh, it is bruce.
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • suedesuede Posts: 247
    nah, Bruce from Finding Nemo :D
  • the unseenthe unseen Posts: 372
    first and foremost
    the lion is a predator
    uses cunning to simulate tenderness
    to hides the darkness in its eyes
    preying on the vulnerable
    to satisfy its hunger
    she crawled into what she hoped was home
    found herself in the belly of a beast
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