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never learn

violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
take this reality from my face
i'm nothing to them
just a dirty disgrace
you get what you ask for
is it what you deserve
standing on the outside
you don't have the nerve
you can’t watch but you look
as you’re waiting your turn
flash of humiliation
how it can burn
questions unanswered
answers unquestioned
which haunts you more?
is this some kind of lesson?
You ask me to enter
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Really strong lyrics. It would sound powerful with an acoustic, played slowly, hitting hard. I feel this.
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    hey dude that stole my birthday :)

    thanks!
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    nosotros nunca eschucamos la voz adentro


    hola mi jita...
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    we never listen to the voice inside?


    i'm waaaaaaay rusty on my spanish.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    :D

    it's the only phrase I know!



    hiya!
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