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violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
dark skies
this is where we should be
outside
clothes soaked
bodies together
leaning against the car
kissing
have you ever felt kisses
while pails of water poured over you
have you held someone so close
that wet clothes made it possible
to feel the skin underneth
have you looked into their eyes
with the raindrops on your lashes
making every thing a little blurry
but a little more sexy
water from the sky on your mouths
making the kisses sweeter
but a lot more passionate
a little bite on the skin of their neck
your wet mouth on his wet skin
he pushes your dripping hair from your face
looks into your eyes, deep into your eyes
almost through your soul
and

and...
You ask me to enter
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    aw, shit, girl...
    you know I have

    :D



    very nice write :D:D:D
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    :D

    haha, remember that "stuff" we were talking about yesterday?

    much needed.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    sho nuff' i do ;D

    sheeshe... what are we gonna do with "we"?
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    PastaNazi wrote:
    sho nuff' i do ;D

    sheeshe... what are we gonna do with "we"?


    you said it. sheeshe.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    i wish you understood
    maybe you do
    maybe you don't
    maybe you just don't care

    i wish i understood
    or didn't care

    all this darkness
    its not the same alone

    **not a poem, obviously

    just wishing for that kiss in the rain i guess.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    i heard a story of another kiss
    can't tell the details, its too personal
    a forest? there were trees,
    and a bikini with flowers
    that kiss stays in my mind
    that's where it will stay
    as a story, nothing more
    :(
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    violet ray wrote:
    dark skies
    this is where we should be
    outside
    clothes soaked
    bodies together
    leaning against the car
    kissing
    have you ever felt kisses
    while pails of water poured over you
    have you held someone so close
    that wet clothes made it possible
    to feel the skin underneth
    have you looked into their eyes
    with the raindrops on your lashes
    making every thing a little blurry
    but a little more sexy
    water from the sky on your mouths
    making the kisses sweeter
    but a lot more passionate
    a little bite on the skin of their neck
    your wet mouth on his wet skin
    he pushes your dripping hair from your face
    looks into your eyes, deep into your eyes
    almost through your soul
    and

    and...


    shelly fairchild

    How'd I get here baby
    How'd I get here in your arms
    Why do you make me crazy
    Why do I love a perfect storm
    I could look at you all night
    Stare into love and know that I

    I wanna feel your face in my hands
    I wanna see your eyes take me in
    I wanna say again and again
    I want to love you
    I wanna let the kiss take it's time
    I wanna go where your soul meets mine
    And let you know that deep down inside
    I want to love you

    I'm so lost in you now
    I'm so lost I can't be found
    My heart's goin' under
    Don't save me baby
    Let me drown
    I want your skin on my skin
    I wanna be someone I've never been

    I wanna feel your face in my hands
    I wanna see your eyes take me in
    I wanna say again and again
    I want to love you
    I wanna let the kiss take it's time
    I wanna go where your soul meets mine
    And let you know that deep down inside
    I want to love you

    I wanna love you
    I wanna love you
    I, I wanna love you

    I wanna feel your face in my hands
    I wanna see your eyes take me in
    I wanna say again and again
    I want to love you
    I wanna let the kiss take it's time
    I wanna go where your soul meets mine
    And let you know that deep down inside
    I want to love you

    I wanna love you
    I want to love you
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I LOVE that first poem...every gals wildest dream!!!!!!!!!!!!:);):)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    Ali wrote:
    I LOVE that first poem...every gals wildest dream!!!!!!!!!!!!:);):)


    thank you, Ali!

    and you said it...but too bad its a dream...

    for now;)
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    violet ray wrote:
    thank you, Ali!

    and you said it...but too bad its a dream...

    for now;)
    Dreams do come true Violet Ray!!!!
    The best ones are worth waiting for!!!!!!!

    <3 ali
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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