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violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
*(not a poem obviously)

i thought it would fill the void in me when you asked me for a hug the other day. something i've been wanting, needing for so long now...just the feel of human contact. it was a nice long hug. as we talked we sat on the bed, eventually lying on the bed. sometimes holding hands. sometimes cuddled up next to each other. once in a while your arm around me or your hand playing with my hair. its a shame that something so innocent, something that should be so comforting, so familiar and so real didn't feel the way it should...maybe for a little while, a temporary fix. i guess too many years of distance (among other things) ..."tattooed everything."
You ask me to enter
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
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Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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  • trappedinmyradiotrappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    hmmmm - it's the small things in life that can be taken to be something absolutely huge, or something absolutely trivial...i like this...
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • Floyd ManzeraFloyd Manzera Posts: 82
    violet ray wrote:
    *(not a poem obviously)

    i thought it would fill the void in me when you asked me for a hug the other day. something i've been wanting, needing for so long now...just the feel of human contact. it was a nice long hug. as we talked we sat on the bed, eventually lying on the bed. sometimes holding hands. sometimes cuddled up next to each other. once in a while your arm around me or your hand playing with my hair. its a shame that something so innocent, something that should be so comforting, so familiar and so real didn't feel the way it should...maybe for a little while, a temporary fix. i guess too many years of distance (among other things) ..."tattooed everything."
    it is the little things that make love work.
    nice prose violet ray.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    very good thoughts violet ray.I was in bed with a friend after sat nights partying and I watched him sllep-started playing with his nose and face.
    I thought,"What if I loved him?"....but friends don't let friends of the opposite sex do that.Unless the attraction is unknown to the other.Then youre taken aback.This poemdescribes it completely.....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    hmm :)

    so much to say
    so much to say
    so much to say
    so much to say



    *zips it* :D



    xo
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