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hunger pains

violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The hunger within
destroys my mind
burns my soul
makes me blind

The hunger inside
away I will waste
it aches for you
just for a taste

The hunger awaits
nothing else will do
the scraps I feed it?
they’re not you

The hunger goes on
how long shall I wait
(this life to the next?)
for our erotic date

The hunger is teased
my kindred mate
you arrive in a dream
but always too late

This hunger of mine
tells me sad but true
There is noone else
I belong to you
You ask me to enter
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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Comments

  • KovoKovo Posts: 255
    Nicely written, it inspried me to write A Sign.
    I shouldn't have to fight a battle I'll never win, just to lose those I've never had.
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    thank you!
    really? you wrote that just then?

    wow
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This one is very well done! :)
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    S W E E T !!!!!!!:d
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    powerful.....
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I can hear your heart grumbling! This was great, violet ray!!! Nice to see you writing. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I hope you don't have to wait too long. Nice poem. It reads well and is full of emotion.
  • decides2dreamdecides2dream Posts: 14,977
    alrighty, i feel durty just for having read that. :o hahaha. i feel like a voyeur now. well done violet, i like it. :D
    Stay with me...
    Let's just breathe...


    I am myself like you somehow


  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    wow, thank you everyone :)


    hey dreamn, glad to see you're back...beautiful pictures!
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • decides2dreamdecides2dream Posts: 14,977
    violet ray wrote:
    wow, thank you everyone :)


    hey dreamn, glad to see you're back...beautiful pictures!


    hey violet!
    good to see you too.
    we should really get togehter - for real - before the holidays descend upon us. glad you are still around, enjoying your writing, and thank you too. :)
    Stay with me...
    Let's just breathe...


    I am myself like you somehow


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