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Goodbye

ZammoZammo Posts: 3
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Ok, this is a new song that i've written for my band. I'm only going to post the verses because i'm not entirely sure what i'm going to do on the chorus yet. It's a bit straightforward and obvious I think but it's from the heart so make of it what you will.

You're moving fast, into the light
You still here their voices as you're closing your eyes.
And although i'm sad, i've got no regrets
Thanks for the memories, i'll never forget you.

And now you drift, far far away
Drifting away I hope it takes away your pain
Can you still see me? Through your angels eyes
Come down and show yourself I need to say goodbye

Are you happy now? Tell me, did you win?
Are there more chapters or is this really the end?
An empty shell, I walk away
Crawl under my rock as you start your life again
"I wish my life could last a thousand years, then i'd be clever, and build a heaven."
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    I can hear music to this already. Thank you for letting us read it. :)
  • ZammoZammo Posts: 3
    No problem at all, thanks for reading it hehe.

    I notice you're from Cambridge, you may get chance to hear it sometime, we're trying to get some gigs in Cambridge. :cool:
    "I wish my life could last a thousand years, then i'd be clever, and build a heaven."
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Sure! I'll look forward to it. Drop a line on this forum when you're playing and I'll come and check it out! :)
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