for your love

Cree Nations

I wait
like a fisherman
for your love
afraid
that you'll
pull out the rug
that
I've been
standin on,
prayin on,
layin on
with you.

setaside2

Hiya.

I know your feelings here and without question respect them.

However, I don't understand where the fisherman comes in... it's imagery doesn't fit with the carpet.

the CARPET, on the other hand. Excellent imaging there.

keep saying what your saying. is all good.

Cree Nations

ahh well I dont know, i wrote that thing like 15 years ago when I was a punkass and just found it. I think I said like a fisherman becaue thats what they do (speaking a a fisherman) they wait for something to bite on their line and it take a lot of patience for that to happen, do you fish?
I hear you though, I thought about that after. thx.

setaside2

it's true. it's all waiting. and waiting. and drinking beer. and waiting.

and then telling stories about how you never had to wait, you master fisherman you.

and don't down your work just because you were a punkass LOL i'm still a punkass and still write.

and yeah. I fish occasionally. both metaphorically and in real life. though occasionally for me right now means about every two years.

first fish was an Indian River catfish in florida. I love catfish. tasty stuff.

and writing about love... well isn't that where it all started? Love and gods.