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It's time to go when...

matt776matt776 Posts: 73
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It's time to go when...
...the cupboards are empty.
...my friends are empty.
...my soul has been emptied.

It's time to go when...
...my lover no longer fills me.
...my anger swells inside.
...I can not pass the blame.

It's time to go when...
...the light fades in the distance,
but I am not moving.
...I watch the sun rise
for a second time.


It's time to go somewhere
"A poet never takes notes. You never take notes in a love affair." R. Frost

"I would have a doctorite in Netetiquette, but I failed the written test." me
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  • FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    that's awesome--really good--
  • cltaylor12cltaylor12 Posts: 125
    .definately.

    Agreed!

    c-
  • matt776matt776 Posts: 73
    ty
    "A poet never takes notes. You never take notes in a love affair." R. Frost

    "I would have a doctorite in Netetiquette, but I failed the written test." me
    www.mudderfudder.com
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    it's time to go when your boxes are packed
    it's time to go when they give you the axe
    it's time to go when home has gone first
    it's time to go when you're always thirsty
    it's time to go when you should have gone then
    it's time to go....when?
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
    It's time to go when the sunsets in the distance
    It's time to go when you are the last one left
    It's time to go...and never come back
    ...only in your dreams
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • matt776matt776 Posts: 73
    It's time to go when...
    ...she no longer looks you in the eye.
    ...cheap booze oozes from her pours.
    ...when she doesn't come looking for you.
    "A poet never takes notes. You never take notes in a love affair." R. Frost

    "I would have a doctorite in Netetiquette, but I failed the written test." me
    www.mudderfudder.com
  • bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
    all I can say is we at the PJ message boards have the most creative and intelligent minds
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • matt776matt776 Posts: 73
    ^ /sarcasm?

    It's ok if it is...just sarcasm doesn't express itself well over the internet.
    "A poet never takes notes. You never take notes in a love affair." R. Frost

    "I would have a doctorite in Netetiquette, but I failed the written test." me
    www.mudderfudder.com
  • PJGirl2004PJGirl2004 Posts: 58
    VERY SIMPLE, VERY TRUE.
    I LIKE YOUR STYLE.
    Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow?
  • dreamncolordreamncolor Posts: 380
    beautiful saddness....truly.
    i'll ride the wave where it takes me
  • bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
    i wanna bring back some of the old poems that have left this part of the message board....its been down so long i figured some should be brought back


    ~~~the classic bump~~~
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
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