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Talking about cats and milk

ItacaItaca Posts: 10
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Talking about cats
The curtains are torn
The sand is everywhere
Shoes are ruined

Cat's face got milk
Milk in lips, Milk in eyes
Wherever milk is
There'll be the cat

Two more cats have come
To join the game
The milk game

Have they know this is my house?
Have they know that's my milk?
Have they know I'm thirsty and hungry?

Be careful! my friend
Because
When the cats smell milk
No roof is secured
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Comments

  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Great stuff. This could be simply be a poem about cats and milk but it could also be the world's most profound allegory for anything you like. I like this piece.

    Cheers.
  • ItacaItaca Posts: 10
    Thank you for your words
  • FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    i agree, great poem.
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