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the worst part...

Spot In The SkySpot In The Sky Posts: 1,175
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The worst part is, I wont realize when I stop thinking about you.

...thank you.
Kevin
"The world is dangerous, feel safe here tonight..." EV 9/17/06

38+6 shows at the age of 27 and counting...but still no Undone

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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    This is a perceptive, clever and heartfelt one line poem. It reminds me of a one liner by Samuel Beckett, in his play "Endgame":

    "The truth was, I was never there."

    Thank for this. This proves that in poetry, less can mean more.

    :)
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    is that the worst part.....?

    that you won't realize it....?

    or is the worst part....when you stop thinking about her.....

    bloody hell....I jus lik this peom so mulch....I wated to say sumptin.....but I find I cain't get udnerneath the peom.....it's prefect....:)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Spot In The SkySpot In The Sky Posts: 1,175
    well heres what it means to me, interrpret as you wish though...
    weve all been hurt by the opposite sex (same sex, if thats your thing) and like i know ive driven myself crazy over this one girl, just thinking about her non stop, and you cant help but think about it sometimes and its depressing and you know by getting her off your mind youll be able to move on. SOOO, its sort of like an accomplishment on my part to get her off my mind, but i wont realize that i actually got to that point because if i did, then id still be thinking about her. so by not thinking about her i win, but i lose the satisfaction and closure of overcoming. hope my explanation didnt ruin it or anything. thank you for the positive feedback.
    Kevin
    "The world is dangerous, feel safe here tonight..." EV 9/17/06

    38+6 shows at the age of 27 and counting...but still no Undone

    My podcast: Hotel Manager Talk- Dedicated to Hotel Employees, tell your friends. http://www.HotelManagerTalk.com
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by Spot In The Sky
    well heres what it means to me, interrpret as you wish though...
    weve all been hurt by the opposite sex (same sex, if thats your thing) and like i know ive driven myself crazy over this one girl, just thinking about her non stop, and you cant help but think about it sometimes and its depressing and you know by getting her off your mind youll be able to move on. SOOO, its sort of like an accomplishment on my part to get her off my mind, but i wont realize that i actually got to that point because if i did, then id still be thinking about her. so by not thinking about her i win, but i lose the satisfaction and closure of overcoming. hope my explanation didnt ruin it or anything. thank you for the positive feedback.
    Kevin

    Your explanation didn't ruin anything. It was an eloquent statement in itself. Beautiful.

    Thank you.
  • bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
    never heard anything like it

    wonderfull
    beautiful
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
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