My first short story, its still kinda long though.

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It is too long to post here, so Ill give the link.
It is called Origins. Please give me feedback. Its kinda a long read, 16 pages double spaced in a word processing program.
There is another one up there that is half done, if you have time to read that one Ill take advice also.

http://spotinthesky.wordpress.com/2008/05/17/origins/
"The world is dangerous, feel safe here tonight..." EV 9/17/06

38+6 shows at the age of 27 and counting...but still no Undone

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