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Intrepidity

Love objectiveLove objective Posts: 37
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Sk8 down the road=======through moments unknown.=======Chek pionts to home=========see you on the clock.=======================================================I dont even know wher you are.===============================================But im not affraid to love.========================================================No need to wish upon the stars.======================================================Heaven knows.==============================================================================================================================================where we may roam===================================Free roll the stone's.===I'll say hello.======Just befor we see.===================================================I dont even know wher you ar=====================================================But im not affraid to love.======================================================No need to wish upon the stars====================================================Heaven know's^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    "Heaven knows,
    What kind of fool am I
    Heaven knows,
    Why you take an eye for an eye
    Heaven knows,
    What comes over me,
    You were pumping iron while I was pumping irony."

    Your poem reminded me of the song Heaven Knows by Robert Plant. :)

    I like how it looks and I like that you used a number 2 make a word! Sk8, that's Gr8, M8! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Love objectiveLove objective Posts: 37
    Thank you. Thats how i wrote it on paper. Dig the 80's.
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