Fool

Lucky Lucy

My dreams are lost
like tears,
to fill your laugh,
and bare my fears.
This Bitch took the bait,
And they'll all lie
in wait,
to see the fool,
who lost her mind to
pleasure.
My tears will soak
my hair,
expose me naked
to the air,
Cold Shame upon my
head,
The fool who loved..
...Dead

FinsburyParkCarrots

That's a real writer.

Thank you.

FancyFacade

well said

Lucky Lucy

ive been browsing this forum for a couple of days now (im only new) and ive been astounded by some of the poetry on here, ive been taken away by image and colour. i am no writer, i just write to clear my head, but I enjoy sharing the these little bits of crap i sweep off my brain. i dread that i sound pretencious. let me know what you think.

thanks, LOL, loosey lucy.

heres another(ive been sweeping)

Turn the tide, tipping all
the ocean on my back, breaking
below the weight of all i need to know,
never knowing all i need, and somehow
slowing to a faster speed,
Heavens but a dream away,
and 9 months hate is all i'll take,
to cure this strong disease.
I'll close the Book and
shut the shop, showing
nothing but my truer self,
a bluer self, lying crying on
the wasters shelf,
i'll wait and see whos left,
then pick my pieces
from the rest,
and free my soul my soul imagination,
cure my mind of this
increasing degredation.

nailz100

My dreams are lost
like tears,
to fill your laugh,
and bare my fears.

I love these lines.....well said. Amazing writer.