Transitional Scenes
FreeWorld
Posts: 9
what is common,
once was me.
just another ripple,
in an endless sea.
Stayed with the tide
blended, a transitional scene
like the sunrise
only to fall...
never departing at all.
At once i stray,
extending strings.
ties break, that once bound me.
grey matter, lore is free
encounters of precision
uncommonly released.
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Here is another one I recently thought up, i take liking to it. About finding who you really are, in a world thats so much the same. i'd really like to know what you guys think.
once was me.
just another ripple,
in an endless sea.
Stayed with the tide
blended, a transitional scene
like the sunrise
only to fall...
never departing at all.
At once i stray,
extending strings.
ties break, that once bound me.
grey matter, lore is free
encounters of precision
uncommonly released.
_______________________________
Here is another one I recently thought up, i take liking to it. About finding who you really are, in a world thats so much the same. i'd really like to know what you guys think.
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~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~
F.ZAPPA
pretty solid, not much detraction from the meter