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if I stay true....

ISNISN Posts: 1,700
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
if I stay true
pain will mend
God will bend
war will end

if I stay true
love will win
life begin

I WILL fight
and I will see
victory

I am strong
stronger than the ocean's timid swell
its glorious wrath
I AM the other path.....

I know the answer
to the questions....
the questions of justice
I will dispell
the hell

I will ignite
the light
I will fight.....

my life has made me ready
I'm ready to instill
the truth
to root out the core
to devour
the great lies
to prise open the jaws
of hell, well,
yes I will.....

I will spill myself
I feel strong....
I'm not wrong
I am glad
....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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Comments

  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    This one shows alot of strength and is well written.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I love rhyme time with ISN!! :) You are strong.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I really like it. Yes, shows strength and perseverance.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    When I first read the poem I felt strength in the words, but then I felt myself physically weak. When/if I am confronted with the opportunity to change what I feel needs to be changed then my courage will be from knowing that no matter how weak I am there is no other way. Very interesting how this affected me. By the way, depopulationINC I like your sig line :-)
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    thanks, hope you don't mind me stealing it. I think I have heard that elsewhere, but when I saw it in print, I knew it had to be mine. ALLL MINE!


    MWAHAHAHAHAHA
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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