Darky # 1

ISNISN Posts: 1,700
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Darky, the flame to my moth
the only one who could claim my troth
the only one whom I tell the truth
the only one.....who I whisper to
in dreams
it seems he feels the pangs
that I'm subjected to
when I think of him
and on a whim
I'm broken but resurrected too
I'm bent and torn and twisted
but he sees the breeze I sat through
on the shores of the Indian Ocean
when sunsets were the potion
that lit my solitude
and all the rude abruptions
which cause me hard disruptions
are diluted and dissolved
when he's around
he's found me
hope he never lets me go
cos I could go quite easily
go mad....I need the lad
who brightens all my bummers
and turns the grey to summers...
the boy the man
him....Darky...him....
you know....Darky
....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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  • dan_alivedan_alive Posts: 123
    "when sunsets were the potion
    that lit my solitude" - love these two lines especially.


    This is great.. you write well indeed! :) Keep it up.. I will be around here more often.
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    actually I'm pretty crap and that was especially crap....hehehehehehe....

    I'm aware that I'm a square.....hehehehe
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • suedesuede Posts: 247
    is there a Darky #2?
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    nah....(or han in chinese)....you know how erratic I am.....I wrote that in the full flush of beer....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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