hopelessly devoted to you....

ISNISN Posts: 1,700
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
all that I've had to go through
and all that I've ever done
will finally be forgotten
like cotton-pickers in the sun
drinking rum....we'll run foto
and be free....my toto's calling me
back to kansas....and darling
we'll be happy...as Larry, my darling Dad
my darling son....we'll run away
we'll fly away (because baby
I can't pay my way...with tears no more
and you won't pay that way, I swore it)

all that I've had to go through
and all that I've ever won
will be forever relished
on our island in the sun
we'll meet with kings and princes
and feathery indian chiefs
and child, our history will be
sculpted in bas-relief
on walls of emerald and sapphire
in fountains of green and blue
we'll make the golden kapphir
write verses round and true
and we'll dance to drums of angels
hearts as they beat for me and you

all that I've ever gone through
and all of the deaths they tolled
will be written in streams of silver
will be sounded in rivers of gold
and then, when I finally know it
and then, when you see that it's true,
you'll know darling you're the reason
for all that I ever do

:)

(for my baby, Torin)
....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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  • i thought this was an Olivia Newton John thread!!!!
    sandy.. baby!
    you hurt me real bad!

    seriously though- i really like this poem

    v.v beautiful!
    Some people have to have the sultry evenings Cocktails in the blue, red and grey But I like every minute of the day.
    INTER-FUCKING-MISSION!!!
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  • gifts of yummy words and sighs of smiles... the best gift of them all.

    i love writing poetry for the ones that i love. it expresses how i feel, and also it's positive for me as well. i really like the rhyming, and the fantastical feel of this piece.

    Makes me go "ahhhh" :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • You're writing some fine poems from the heart these days, ISN. Thank you for sharing them.

    :)
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    thanks sultryevening, of_the_girl and Finsbury.....it made me feel good to write it.....he's taking up all of me atm....I luv my bubba.....:)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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