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my lawyer

ISNISN Posts: 1,700
edited May 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
My lawyer is an angel;
I love him more than life.
if he weren't already married
I'd surely be his wife!!!

(I might use punctuation for my peotry, and leave the ellipses or whatever the fukkers are called, for my other posts)
....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    punctuation is not a habit - I totally screwed up, but I think I'll continue to use it in the peotry section. (Please ignore the dire punctuation in this little ditty). Fins, I keep postponing reading that article on truth - I reallly want to revive that thread after I've read the two articles.
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    I like the semi-colon. Was it George Moore who insisted on it in poetry?
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    My E.S.Q
    graduated from NYU
    so smart I'm lucky
    she has a daughter
    that is ME :-)

    On an old book bag she loaned to me was written
    "Never underestimate the power of a Woman."
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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