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does anyone....?

ISNISN Posts: 1,700
edited April 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
does anyone write peoms which they don't want to share.....like to keep a bit for yourslef.....like to keep something private......to shore against disclosure......something to be discovered post-humously......jus something......so that they don't get everything? I'm not asking you to post them, but I am so open.....basically, there would be nothing left for me, if I didn't try to hold something back and keep it to myself......almost like revenge on you guys for seeing my most personal stuff......anyone else?
....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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  • tsopotelbatsopotelba Posts: 80
    YES, except not with poetry because I don't write poetry, but other things, little things, sentences here and there that mean so much to me and are so good that there's no way I'd let them out into the world.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    it's so liberating to not be completely upfront about everything.....normally I'm really open.....cos I don't know any1, but the shell thing is good......hehehehehheeh.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Well, it's actually new for me to let anything I write or think is important come out. So, yeah, I hold a lot in my pocket. :)
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    all my poetry posts, with the exception of maybe the first two or three, have been nothing more than opening a new thread and letting it go.

    the more intricately crafted and deeply personal moments, i've kept to myself. i can only think of a handful of people i'd feel comfortable sharing them with....even at that it would be pretty frightening to let go of.
  • KovoKovo Posts: 255
    I share pretty much everything else, so only a few people get to see my poems, and only some poems at that. I like keeping it mine.
    I shouldn't have to fight a battle I'll never win, just to lose those I've never had.
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    i can only say that i have poems i haven't written which are bitter left forgitten the witch of theezth i had not yet dreamt lest i break down and cry .. i just wanna feel
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    These days, I'm not inclined to share anything until I'm satisfied it's either just throwaway doggerel or something that's of any consequence.
  • freewheelin_mindfreewheelin_mind Posts: 28
    i have a feeling, like if iput something on here, then like ,i find someone singing it in montreal or istanbul or sumshit, causing a rock revolution. i dont put much on here.
    But you break like a little girl.
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    but are we real?

    dun dun dun...
    The king of run on sentences...
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I really think some of your recent peoms deserve some comments.....and I will endeavour....heheheheheh.....to do just that......heheheheheh.....I'm a twat.......yeah, real is here.......this is real.......there's no dumb bullshit apart from a certain person I could mention.......which I won't......but most of us in the poetry section are pretty.....A average.....nomral.....straight...up....cornflakes.....hehehhe
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Yep, you're real, ISN. Those dot dot dots aren't mere ellipses. They're a true heart beating. :)
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    it's jus laziness Fins.....and you know it.....:D
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    most of the time....I'm very relaxed.....but if I get upset.....I use exacting punctuation.....and am pretty stressed.....I jus started my job editing on Monday, and I'm pleased to say......that I am doing a brilliant job.....and could pretty much edit the company out of existence......I hope to be their best editor, and get promoted.....and I really think that seeing as I have to be so exact for my work, I shouldn't have to bother when I'm relaxing......I love punctuation, and its ability to clarify meaning, but I will be fecked if I have to bloody use a comma every few seconds when I write on teh intahweb......plus....I really do think that people on this section are more real......than some other sections......jus cos they post their peom.....nad wait for good or bad comments.....and they don't engage in petty politics.....plus we're quite friendly amongst ourselves, without being camp....hehehheeh
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • rubyruby Posts: 103
    :) @ Finsbury and ISN.
    I don't really share much at all here or anywhere. Mostly cos most of the stuff is still in my head or on bits of scrappy paper spread all over the house which eventually get lost. Also, the few times I'm had the temerity to share something here no one's commented so I assumed it was crap (even though to me it still meant something). ie You're all a pack of bastards. :)
  • rubyruby Posts: 103
    ISN wrote:
    most of the time....I'm very relaxed.....but if I get upset.....I use exacting punctuation.....and am pretty stressed.....I jus started my job editing on Monday, and I'm pleased to say......that I am doing a brilliant job.....and could pretty much edit the company out of existence......I hope to be their best editor, and get promoted.....and I really think that seeing as I have to be so exact for my work, I shouldn't have to bother when I'm relaxing......I love punctuation, and its ability to clarify meaning, but I will be fecked if I have to bloody use a comma every few seconds when I write on teh intahweb......plus....I really do think that people on this section are more real......than some other sections......jus cos they post their peom.....nad wait for good or bad comments.....and they don't engage in petty politics.....plus we're quite friendly amongst ourselves, without being camp....hehehheeh

    LOL, look at what I've just written. Well done with the new job, ISN. Little Miss Super Editor :).
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    I'm too ugly and hairy to camp
    I'm more likely to pass for a tramp
    and by tramp I mean yoke
    and by yoke I mean bloke
    that might live on a car parking ramp :cool:
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    I'm too ugly and hairy to camp
    I'm more likely to pass for a tramp
    and by tramp I mean yoke
    and by yoke I mean bloke
    that might live on a car parking ramp :cool:
    OK, maybe you should have kept that one to yourself . . . .JUST KIDDING! you funny man, Mr. Carrots.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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