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The World Must Stop

ISNISN Posts: 1,700
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
While My Baby Sleeps
If There Are Cars
Please No Beeps
If There Are Birds
No Twitters Or Cheeps
And If Old Women
Want To Shout In The Streets
Warning To You HAWKERS
No Squakers.....
No Trolley-Collecting
I Am Protecting
My Baby
....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    ISN wrote:
    While My Baby Sleeps
    If There Are Cars
    Please No Beeps
    If There Are Birds
    No Twitters Or Cheeps
    And If Old Women
    Want To Shout In The Streets
    Warning To You HAWKERS
    No Squakers.....
    No Trolley-Collecting
    I Am Protecting
    My Baby

    I like the use of capitals! The poem shouts, Keep Quiet!, and that's its charm. The rhymes dance, the rhythm swings.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    thanks Fins.....I had to shout today, to ensure that Baby Could Sleep.....damn hawkers!!!!!
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Cute Isn...


    gotta watch over that precious cargo!



    :)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    I like the use of capitals! The poem shouts, Keep Quiet!, and that's its charm. The rhymes dance, the rhythm swings.

    couldn't have said it any better than this. rock on!
    .........................................................................
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