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I'd like to thank Fins

ISNISN Posts: 1,700
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
for his generosity
whilst dealing with
my precocity....
childish nad sweet
ever in.....evering
retreat......
slinging
not winning
but convincing
and evincing......
and he's part of this
he's my hit n miss
my nearly there
my circle square
I wanna thank
him 4 puttin up wit me
cos I'm not nice as you lot
but I'm free
and I think (both of us)
can see
that we're simply
both of us can see
that we're simply
very complexly
and him more than me
free
....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    I agree completely

    Here Here!
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    This ones for you finns....:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Thanks, ISN. Thanks, ETE and Ali.
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    ISN wrote:
    for his generosity
    whilst dealing with
    my precocity....
    childish nad sweet
    ever in.....evering
    retreat......
    slinging
    not winning
    but convincing
    and evincing......
    and he's part of this
    he's my hit n miss
    my nearly there
    my circle square
    I wanna thank
    him 4 puttin up wit me
    cos I'm not nice as you lot
    but I'm free
    and I think (both of us)
    can see
    that we're simply
    both of us can see
    that we're simply
    very complexly
    and him more than me
    free

    Fins is cool and I have been inspired to go back to reading "me ol' poetry books and other literuchur" :) due to his posts. this forum is fortunate to have his input.

    cheers to the mr carrots!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    yes fins is way cool. ;}
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I was a bit rash the other night, cos of me situation, and I said something mean to him, but I immediately regretted it, hence this peom.....he is so learned and wise......he keeps this place ticking over......I probably wouldn't stick around that much if Fins wasn't here.....:) (but don't think you can get rid of me by leaving either......heheheheheh)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    ISN wrote:
    I said something mean to him,

    I must have missed that! :)
  • edeneden Posts: 407
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    I must have missed that! :)

    Fins' knowledge of lit. astounds me consistantly :)
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