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if I had amnesia

ISNISN Posts: 1,700
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I would dream of you nightly
and fall in love with you daily
I know you're no St George
or someone to cut them off at the gorge.....
but you appeal to me oddly
and odd as I am
I dream of you daily
you don't have a face
(hey, looks don't matter)
but you inspire me
and all the hills the birds the neverending bliss of Australia
is only compounded by my curiosity about you....
I'm happy, so I don't need you
much as I don't need anyone
but sometimes I wonder
why I dream about you every night
but I guess it's okay.....
it doesn't hurt you
being in love sometimes is
just a joke
....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I like this one ISN.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    thanx Twin2....ya know you feel like you're in love.....but it doesn't make sense....guess it's making me happy.....so that can't be bad.....I have an idea in my head about someone.....and it makes me feel like I'm swimming in calm waters....and so much more than that....it's hard to explain.....I guess I'm just lucky.......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I do understand what you are talking about. Love is a natural high and makes you feel good. It's seems funny to me that you don't really have any control over who you fall in love with. It just happens. Your heart seems to decide it for you no matter what your head tells you.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Yeah, love's a funny thing. You know, ISN, you said, "I have an idea in my head about someone.....and it makes me feel like I'm swimming in calm waters"--sometimes it's more fun just having the idea and not really knowing. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
    ISN wrote:
    I would dream of you nightly
    and fall in love with you daily
    I know you're no St George
    or someone to cut them off at the gorge.....
    but you appeal to me oddly
    and odd as I am
    I dream of you daily
    you don't have a face
    (hey, looks don't matter)
    but you inspire me
    and all the hills the birds the neverending bliss of Australia
    is only compounded by my curiosity about you....
    I'm happy, so I don't need you
    much as I don't need anyone
    but sometimes I wonder
    why I dream about you every night
    but I guess it's okay.....
    it doesn't hurt you
    being in love sometimes is
    just a joke

    Are you cheatin on me honey??
    you say he has no face? like one of those kids in the Pink Floyd - The Wall movie... Edvard Munch's screamadelica kinda faces?

    p.s. I liked your angry one the other day... the one you scrubbed... most violent it was!
    oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    ISN wrote:
    you don't have a face
    (hey, looks don't matter)

    Is this a feeling about someone who hasn't entered your life yet, of do you have a crush on someone from this board? :)
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    It's obviously not about me. Otherwise she would have written

    I know you're no St Patrick
    In fact, I've heard tell you're a fat prick

    :D
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    pacifier wrote:
    Is this a feeling about someone who hasn't entered your life yet, of do you have a crush on someone from this board? :)

    I think it's depop, he wrote ISN and I love poems a little while back and I had to turn him down on account of me being engaged and all, but as far as I know ISN was free, so ooooooooooooo, maybe something came of it ;) i kid, or do i?
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I know you're no St Patrick
    In fact, I've heard tell you're a fat prick

    I know you're not St Brigid
    cos word's out that she's frigid.....:D

    guess I can laugh about it now......as it's 5.30am......in the am......and my hopeless love can tease me no more, but I'm hoping that I am excrutiatingly mortified to the extent that I write copious poems denying it......or just being my usual arsey self.......:)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    its the greater power or what i express as the holy spirit
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I truly loved this one. I do not know why, or at least I can't explain right now, but I loved it.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    I truly loved this one. I do not know why, or at least I can't explain right now, but I loved it.
    because it's about you :D
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    because it's about you :D


    shhh...You'll scare her off again
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    shhh...You'll scare her off again
    :D woops, sorry
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    :D woops, sorry

    besides, I have large eyes


    and they only envision you.


    Your blatent rejection of me has crushed my spirit forever.


    I am but a shattered man.


    :(
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    besides, I have large eyes


    and they only envision you.


    Your blatent rejection of me has crushed my spirit forever.


    I am but a shattered man.


    :(

    woops again. Sorry ISN, looks like I ruined him for you.
    Don't worry depop, one day a nice girl with superglue will come along and piece you back together again.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    woops again. Sorry ISN, looks like I ruined him for you.
    Don't worry depop, one day a nice girl with superglue will come along and piece you back together again.


    love eggs

    love em
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    love eggs

    love em

    well maybe she'll cook you eggs too
  • darkmandarkman Posts: 4
    She's talkin' about me. :)




    I try to love her as well.......but she makes it...so...damn....hard.
  • dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
    man... you guys are way off the mark ;)

    its the scottish nutjob, the haggis advocate, the beefcake from the land of pale blue people... you know the guy... the King of the Bees... the Agent Orange of Porridge. :)

















    p.s.
    ISN, whats happened to you? no contacty for ages and I canny PM you
    oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
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