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Ten

pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
My sister knows what a PJ nut I am, so she wrote me this poem. I thought it was quite well done, so I thought I would share it here with other PJ nuts.

I <b>once</b> thought ' <b>Why Go</b>?'
Why dive into the <b>deep, black, oceans</b>?
Why not take the steady, relaxed <b>even flow</b> of sitting on the <b>porch</b>, overlooking the <b>garden</b>...
but I get it now.
It was a <b>release</b>.
You felt <b>alive</b>.

<b>JEREMY (ten)</b>
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  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    hmm, that didn't work quite as expected and now I can't edit it. You are just going to have to imagine that the words between the <b> and </b> are in bold. sorry about that.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Use square brackets for vBulletin code. :)
  • DinghyDogDinghyDog Posts: 587
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  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    can someone please tell me how the edit feature has been abused in here?
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