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pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
she wakes every morning
sick with the thought of the day ahead
never enjoying the time that she spends in beds

the blood stops
she knows what's next
but more bills
means more......

deny her thoughts
reject her dreams
she lives in reality

she feels it move as he walks away
just makes it through another day
only looks as far as her next hit
she finds enough to share a trip

in the gutter
mother and child
only each other
only on trial

then all at once all is lost
in a high price life
it was her greatest cost

all has changed
stays the same
too soon returns
her life, her shame
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  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Born Under A Red Light
    Do What Mama Does
    "is This My Daddy?"
    She Thinks With Disgust
    And Rolls Over......

    Wishes She Could Keep On Going

    ......roll Down The Mountain
    Into The Sea

    Sink Deep
    Deep
    Deep

    Forget To Breathe
    Forget To Grieve
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    pacifier wrote:
    she wakes every morning
    sick with the thought of the day ahead
    never enjoying the time that she spends in beds

    the blood stops
    she knows what's next
    but more bills
    means more......

    deny her thoughts
    reject her dreams
    she lives in reality

    she feels it move as he walks away
    just makes it through another day
    only looks as far as her next hit
    she finds enough to share a trip

    in the gutter
    mother and child
    only each other
    only on trial

    then all at once all is lost
    in a high price life
    it was her greatest cost

    all has changed
    stays the same
    too soon returns
    her life, her shame
    interesting piece:)
    allison
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Ali wrote:
    interesting piece:)
    allison

    thanks. don't know if it makes sense. It does to me, but that is because it came from my head. I've noticed I have written a lot of stuff as if it were a story, cos in my head I see this person and feel what they are feeling and know what they are doing. I don't know if I ever express it clearly though. It's like I have background knowledge that I don't show, at least not clearly, so I can't tell if people would know where I am coming from or not.
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I like it too. It held my interest as well.
  • GutterpoetGutterpoet Posts: 12
    I think it's fat!!!!
    The message is here, crystal clear
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Gutterpoet wrote:
    I think it's fat!!!!

    Hey I just saw that you were on, so I wanted to ask a question. what did you mean by what is quoted here? if you mean like that phat=good thing, I haven't heard that in years.
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    pacifier wrote:
    Hey I just saw that you were on, so I wanted to ask a question. what did you mean by what is quoted here? if you mean like that phat=good thing, I haven't heard that in years.

    damn, now your gone. oh well.
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