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...with love

pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
to the one I chose without a choice
you give me freedom, you give me myself
the peace of feeling alone with you
alone and together and always the truth


to the one i spoke without a voice
dreaming of a face unseen and needing, needing
we are two to become a third and a fourth
yet still only one, me South, you North

to rv
with love
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :D Awww that was uber sweet, pacifier! I hope rv appreciates it! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    I agree, very nice. Happy Valentines Day! Thanks for sharing.
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    :D Awww that was uber sweet, pacifier! I hope rv appreciates it! :)

    thank you. I think he did :)
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    coachchris wrote:
    I agree, very nice. Happy Valentines Day! Thanks for sharing.

    thanks. Hope your Valentines Day was a good one too :)

    I actually wasn't expecting a response to this one
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    that is a sweet piece
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    that is a sweet piece

    thank you. I just rushed it down to share with my man. it felt incomplete, like i had more i wanted to write, but didn't know what, but now i'm thinking that reflects real-life. We are still going, there is still more to come, I just don't know what that is yet, but I'm certainly looking forward to it :)
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Very nice pacifier... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    pacifier wrote:
    thank you. I just rushed it down to share with my man. it felt incomplete, like i had more i wanted to write, but didn't know what, but now i'm thinking that reflects real-life. We are still going, there is still more to come, I just don't know what that is yet, but I'm certainly looking forward to it :)

    :):) Exactly! Just keep that pen and paper handey for the next installment, pacifier. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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