dream

pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i look out my square, i see through my see-through. my eyes lay on a patch of black, where the light shines through. i watch them every dark to magic my grey. they move without walking, the flying catch my sight. this one flew, but threw my eyes, as they all ran without running, down the other side. behind the lump my lights did go, though my black glowed all the same, to light my dark, but dark it was. my dots slid down, behind the mound, which sliced to pieces and scurried down. more it fell til it fell no more, but never ending. cutting closer, nearer it came. my feetspace dropping into less than space. my green-brown tumbled down and red lit in its place. no-more i can stop to fight or fight to stop. no war here but death, i fear. this is the day.
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    That's creepy but very well written.
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    twin2 wrote:
    That's creepy but very well written.

    thank you. I think I have already talked about my lifetime of weird dreams, usually nightmares. This is another end-of-the-world one
  • I have repedative dreams from time to time. I love to hate em

    interesting read
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I have repedative dreams from time to time. I love to hate em

    interesting read


    I only had one repetative one that was back when I was a kid. I used to have alot of nightmares when I lived in Oklahoma with my mother-in-law. They usually had big, black taranchulas in them. I even had one that a wasp flew down my shirt and I grabbed it through my shirt and closed it in my palm. That woke me up and it felt just like it stung me. It was so real.
  • HenkeHenke Posts: 34
    Cool poem.

    I have repetative dreams all the time. Especially one has left its mark, I dream that I stand outside my house on a couple of stairs. I look up at the sky, it is pitch black, and I see the stars glow in the distant. I see a constellation that looks like a saucer. Suddenly it forms into a UFO, flies down to me... and I wake up. I think it is very frustrating that Ive never seen what happens next 'cause Ive dreamt it alot of times.
    Smart is being able to see the obvious
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