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Now & Then

pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Sometimes is now
sometimes when I'm falling down
it's so hard to get back up
sometimes when thoughts seem so real
that reality tends to kill
sometimes when it seems so hard
when looks fail and thoughts fade
sometimes when it's hard to believe
and it's tough just being and knowing
sometimes when only thoughts of then
can keep me going
sometimes, until sometimes goes
and then becomes now.
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  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    this reminds me of a time when i was jogging and writing really sad things and i was really lost looking for something or someone when all that matters is faith

    now lately i been thinkin i found you where had you been yet still inside i just wonder whats most important

    i think i found you with an innocent smile is good
    now is it good enough

    thats when i refer to faith
    faith and fear are really strong things

    sometimes when they are alone life can be scarey
    but together
    everything is alright

    nice writing
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    lovin kind wrote:
    this reminds me of a time when i was jogging and writing really sad things and i was really lost looking for something or someone when all that matters is faith

    now lately i been thinkin i found you where had you been yet still inside i just wonder whats most important

    i think i found you with an innocent smile is good
    now is it good enough

    thats when i refer to faith
    faith and fear are really strong things

    sometimes when they are alone life can be scarey
    but together
    everything is alright

    nice writing

    I'm going to have to re-read this a few times. It's nearly 3am here and my name is faith, so all i'm reading is that you have found me, and I'm a little worried.
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    pacifier wrote:
    I'm going to have to re-read this a few times. It's nearly 3am here and my name is faith, so all i'm reading is that you have found me, and I'm a little worried.

    mm, might have to re-read in the morning when I can focus, cos rite niow I'm paranoid that you are in my house or something :)
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    ive been awake for more hours than sleep calls for and thats when i open up
    its just rambling mostly but the part about faith and fear i kind of feel most strongley about for now

    i believe that the fear of god takes away all of our burdens and that faith is in the love of god and the love god has for us as the creation

    god bless all of our prescious souls
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    lovin kind wrote:
    ive been awake for more hours than sleep calls for and thats when i open up
    its just rambling mostly but the part about faith and fear i kind of feel most strongley about for now

    i believe that the fear of god takes away all of our burdens and that faith is in the love of god and the love god has for us as the creation

    god bless all of our prescious souls

    of course, sorry about that, I like what you are saying, but my mind was getting tired and I was unable to distinguish between my name and the word. read through your first post up until "now is it good enough" but replace the word faith with your name :)
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